week11 Self Evaluation

1) What score do you think you deserve? Here is the rubric:
-I want to give 1 points to me because my essay is not perfect and needs many correction .


2) What did you do well?
- I couldn't get good research however, I think that I suggested good examples and reasons.

3) What could you have done better?
- I think I am not good at collecting informations to support my opinion but I think Suggesting my opinion and reasons strongly is my best point.

4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?
I think confirmation is best because confirmation is similar body paragraph which I have written for a long time. Thus I could write confirmation easily than other part of my essay.


5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?
I think narration is the most poor part because I had never experienced it when I wrote. Thus I can't write it naturally. It was difficult in that I can't write as my thought.

6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better?
- My strategy to make my second draft better than first is supplementation of the weak poin in first draft. I think that my weak point is narration. I will find many other examples and write better. I also supplement my strong point such as confirmation. Thus I will make my second drafte balanced.