Grade
According to the rubric above, what grade would you give this essay? Why?
.....(for 5,6)4points, In my opnion, she did her best to write it and her performance is logical and convinving. However, I am not good evaluater. so I can't give her full point in that there could be flaw that I didn't find.
How does this essay need to improve to get a better grade?
......(for 5,6)I can't give her an advice. If I can give an advice, I could wirte my draft much better. However she wrote with uneven point(9~13?). Her draft would better if she make point even. If she make the gap between introduction and main thesis more natural, her essay would be better.
(for 5)She wrote with classical argument and logical thesis.
I thinik Her have many positive things in writing.
She seems to be a writer who brainstorm whole essay before write first paragraph.
However, I think she can wirte better than now.
(for 6) She have positive point in wiriting as a skillful writer.
Her text is very clear. She can write very naturally.
I think her literature sense is most strong point in her essay.
